I made these posters recently for my girlfriend (don’t make fun:) haha and my good friends for Christmas. I just wanted some feedback on the overall design. Thoughts?
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These are great! I’m so happy that typography is being treated with the design respect it deserves! Fun, fun, fun!
Well thank you, that’s very kind. I’m glad you like them!
Awesome job, dude! I love these!
Bigger, sometimes, is better though. But moving on,
1.
Everyday should be two words, I think.
The arrow type shape at the bottom containing YOU cuts too close to the U. I’d move the word a bit to the left or make the shape a bit longer.
I love the way Perfectly cuts through the other words but how the f cuts through the A bugs me. It creates an awkward negative shape.
2.
SKY seems too loose and weak. Try a bolder, heavier look maybe?
3.
Sh in Shalay needs kerning.
Part of your banner looks cut off, on the left side.
Is it just me or does it seem weird to use est. (established) for a couple? I might be weird but I don’t want people saying that my relationship or marriage was “established in 2008”.